Great limerick Bitner! I really like the middle two lines - he like to roll, so he was put in a bowl - he sounds like a naughty kid who gets some timeout. A fun poem - well done.
Kia ora Bitner. Great work on the limerick. You have followed the format correctly and it flows well. Limericks can be really fun to write and read. You should keep writing more! maybe one about covid19!
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ReplyDeletekia ora wow nice job.you did well and it was very funny at the end later
ReplyDeleteI'm really enjoying reading the limericks. I agree with Tai, I like the funny ending.
ReplyDeleteHi Bitner, your limerick is funny, silly, has 5 lines and rhymes-all the things it is meant to be!! Great work, I hope you had fun writing it?
ReplyDeleteGreat limerick Bitner! I really like the middle two lines - he like to roll, so he was put in a bowl - he sounds like a naughty kid who gets some timeout. A fun poem - well done.
ReplyDeleteHi Bitner well done I enjoyed your poem blog ya later Mackenzie.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Bitner. Great work on the limerick. You have followed the format correctly and it flows well. Limericks can be really fun to write and read. You should keep writing more! maybe one about covid19!
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